God's Love Was Not In A Hurry
Posted: Thursday, May 21, 2009
by David Pekrul
How often do we have dreams, yet how often do we remember them. Even if we do remember them, how often do they really have an affect on us. Well, just last night I had a dream that I can't shake. So I wrote this short poem.
God's Love Was Not In A Hurry
Telling him to "Hurry, hurry, hurry",
"But Dad, I bought you a gift and I need to pay",
"Just hurry", I heard myself say.
How could I be so cold and uncaring,
Thinking only of myself?
He had bought me a gift,
A gift out of love, and just wanted to pay.
The guilt and shame overwhelmed me.
It was only a dream, but the feeling was real,
"Dad, I need to pay, I bought you a gift",
"Just hurry, hurry, I haven't the time, just hurry."
Then I thought of my Saviour,
"Dad, I bought you a gift, the souls of men,
And I need to pay",
And God the Father said, "Well then my Son, go on your way."
"Take the time you need and do it right",
So God sent His Son to pay the price,
And I woke in a sweat at what I had heard,
For God's love was not in a hurry.
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Top-level comments on this article: (7 total)Thanks David. Very well said. One thing for sure, we are still a work in process.Thanks for your comments, Dr. Rucker.I'm glad He's not finished with me yet, because I seem to be falling short.
David,I applaud such a wonderful spirit centered piece. Keep it coming. Your friend in pen and deed.LawrenceThanks Lawrence,I appreciate your comments.
Another great poem, David. You are going to turn me into a poetry lover yet!Thanks Lorrie,If I turn you into a poetry lover, then my job is done, but I'll still keep writing.
Excellent David. Thank you for sharing your dream. It was indeed a word for the rest of us. Blessings! TeresaThanks Teresa,This is the third poem I have written based on a dream. Usually I don't remember my dreams after I wake up, or they're just too stupid, but lately some have been great. Maybe that scripture verse applies to me, "Old men shall dream dreams." lolha! maybe so...any word on the Return :-)I'm afraid that one's up to God. I don't think He'll make me privy to that.shucky darn...but good answer :-) have a wonderful weekend!
Oh, David. That was so beautiful. I love your poetry. These thoughts were in your heart and soul, or you would not have dreamed them. Thanks for sharing such lovely thoughts.SandraThanks Sandra,I don't usually have such vivid dreams, but I'm thankful for the times that I do.
Well done, David. This poem holds such emotion and intensity. You, sir, are indeed an artist.Thanks Ken,Indeed a great compliment coming from such a great writer as yourself.
Hi David,Great poem, as always, coming from you, very insightful. You are a true weaver of words, a poet. Thanks for sharing.Always your fan,Nenita"A weaver of words" - oh, I like that! You're too kind, but I appreciate your comments and especially you reading my stuff.David
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